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The Girl on the Metro PART 5


Amélie sat down on her chair in the balcony brooding about what had just happened. She lost track of time and didn’t realize 30 minutes had already passed until her phone rang and Liza stood up and looked in its direction.

Amélie threw the cigarette she was smoking and grabbed her phone off the table next to her to realize it was her colleague video calling her.

“There is no need to answer,” she thought after checking the time which was 9:45,”I know why they’re calling”. She was late for her job.

So she put her phone down and went into the bathroom and took a quick shower which she followed by drying her hair and herself up and dressing in her formal attire. She applied some fond de teint on her face and some dark rouge on her lips, then she made her blond hair into a ponytail. She contemplated into her fine figure in the mirror for a second:  she observed her blue eyes and figured she doesn’t need mascara and her cheeks seemed rosy enough today; no more cosmetics required.

So she got out of the bathroom, wore her shoes, kissed Liza goodbye and lit another cigarette and made her way to the subway station.

By the time she reached the station, she had already smoked two cigarettes. She found an ashtray next to the entrance of the station so she pressed her cigarette against it and then threw it in the garbage bin.

She got onto the platform station and found an empty bench so she sat down waiting for the next metro to come.

A few minutes have passed and the operater declared to "Please stand clear from the platform edges".

A metro soon after came whirling and the squeaking of its breaks was heard and finally stopped at its designated place.

Amélie mounted the metro and found a bar to cling to at the middle of the wagon. She was listening to music and was observing those coming on and off the metro with eyes wide open in a desperate attempt to see Pierre. But obviously, he was never to be seen.

She reached her station and she got off the metro and headed to her company wherein she was welcomed by her colleagues and made aware that she was late for the reunion.

So she found her way to the 7th floor where the reunion was held and knocked twice on the door and entered the room with her portfolio which contained the new packaging designs.

After a few hours of discussing what the company is lacking and in which direction it's heading, the reunion came to an end and it was lunch time. She had her lunch at the restaurant facing the company entrance with her colleagues and was told more than once that something seemed off with her today.

Amélie could have spoken about her anxiety and what had chanced the night before, but she chose to remain silent and keep to herself the whole day. For all her colleagues' endeavours to make her talk about what's ailing her, she didn't bend and kept faking a smile the whole time to reassure them that everything is okay.

After the lunch was over, they headed back to L'Oréal headquarters and worked for more couple of hours until it was 5 p.m.

Amelie left the building and departed to Alexandre Dumas metro station on foot and found a café right next to it, so she went in and sat in the terrace area facing the descending stairs to Alexandre Dumas subway platform.



She ordered a medium-sized decaffeinated coffee macchiato and crossed her legs. She brought her cigarettes out. She lit the first one and halfway through it, her coffee was ready and she started sipping it while puffing every now and then. She checked her wristwatch and it struck 6:15pm.

Like in the balcony earlier that day, she just smoked her cigarette and sipped her coffee observing the random passengers and the petty sceneries in front of her while hazy thoughts and reflections flowed in her head like a river.

The thought that consumed her and grew to magnanimous dimensions to the point of overshadowing the rest was why did Pierre do such thing. Why did he leave her turmoiling thus and why couldn't she come to her senses and move on already?

These 3 questions were circulating in her consciousness simultaneously and they all formed the aforementioned thought. But strangely enough, she had this wicked voice inside of her head that convinced her that she doesn't care.

She sat on the chair in the cafeteria playing with her inner demons, and the clock struck 7:00pm. At this point, Amélie finished her pack of cigarettes and had some coffee left which she sipped in one gulp. From here on out, she fixed her eyes on the entrance to the metro platform of Alexandre Dumas station and was expecting Pierre to show up at any moment.

Circa 15 minutes later and Pierre have come from the opposite direction in his formal costume with his bag on his back. Hurriedly, he descended the stairs and went underground.

Amélie had to take a decision. She was torn between her incredible desire to hear from him and smell his cologne one more time and the deamonic voice which grew louder and louder telling her to walk away.

For a good while, she thought through her situation and fought the voice, but the more she did, the faster her heartbeats became and the longer she held her breath.

After approximately 7 minutes, Pierre came out of the station and looked around searching for Amélie. The latter spotted him but stayed motionless. Pierre waited for another couple of minutes and then went down again.

Amélie reached a level of anxiety that she's never experienced before. Slowly, she stood off her chair, and then she brought her phone out of her purse, inserted her earphones and walked in the direction of the metro station.

A few metres seprated her from the  descending stairs when she had a sudden change of heart. She halted. Took a deep breath closing  her eyes. Turned around. And walked in the opposite direction without looking back.

Pierre in one last attempt got out of the station and saw how she turned around but he didn't react. He smiled, took his headset and iPod out and went down into the station.

It's been a long day for him, and he could never get used to the cold Parisian breeze that blew every evening. So he sat down on a bench on the platform station with a burn in his eyes and a headache that cracked his skull in half.

FINIS.

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